The dark is coming, In my eyes,
you better look out guys, it's in your lies.
Dark is rising, in the wind,
with the sins,
oh my.
I wanna go away, far away,
away from this place,
to a place where darkness's never been to.
The dead are rising from their graves,
what will you do when they come for you?
Our times is the one,
corrupt,
and done.
We were too late,
to understand,
our faith~~.
I wanna go away,
far away,
away from this place,
run away,
away,
a-wa-a-ay.
Our world is run by,
politics,
companies,
therefor liars can you see?
I wanna go away,
far away,
away from this place,
could God come and end it today?
See the kids sad in their minds,
longing for their lives.
Where is the hero,
we're waiting for,
to take the evil away,
or is there a hero at all?
I wanna go away,
far away,
away from this place,
life is a waist,
that's what they say.
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This is very good ...I like it although it truly a bit feels like a heavy metal song
but a great job anyway
How about food companies that make healthy food?
In Finland you guys have KC super market.
In America we have Kroger,Publix,Whole Foods, and a lot more
Politics maybe... companies... No
I agree with my friend Vlad. You could actually make this rap for a heavy beat.
Your song is really teachible and rite, but I know that politics and companies lie but I have to agree they still keep us alive.
i don't really know if this is rap or not- but if you would rap this for like a heavy metal beat i should say- then it would be really good-----my opinion-------